Melodie here. No one writes a more entertaining and informative blog
than my pal Anne R. Allen. If you only read one post on writing this
year, make it this one. And if that last example doesn't put a smile on
your face, I'm not Bad Girl. (Which I am.)
Chekhov's Gun - Why It's Important to Fiction Writers
by Anne R. Allen
Anton Chekhov, the Russian playwright, also wrote short stories, essays and instructions for young writers. Probably his most famous writerly advice is this admonition:
"If in the first act you have hung a pistol on the wall, then in the following one it should be fired. Otherwise don't put it there."
In other words, remove everything that has no relevance to the story. If chapter one says your mild-mannered reporter heroine won a bunch of trophies for archery which she displays prominently alongside her handmade Mongolian horse longbow, she better darn well shoot an arrow before the story is done.
"Mood and Setting" Details vs. Chekhov's Gun
Yeah, but what if that longbow is there to show us what her apartment looks like? It's good to show her decor, because it gives an insight into her character, right?
It depends. Yes, we do want to use details to set tone and give depth to our characters, but the key is how you stress those details when you first present them.
If there's a whole paragraph about those archery trophies, or the characters have a conversation about the Mongolian horse longbow, you need to shoot some arrows. But if there's just a cursory mention, "her apartment walls were decorated with an odd assortment of personal trophies and exotic weapons" then you can leave them on the wall.
So not every lampshade the author mentions has to show up two chapters later on the head of a drunken ex-boyfriend, but you need to be careful how much emphasis you put on that lampshade.
What about Red Herrings?
Wait
a minute - what if you write mysteries? Mysteries need irrelevant
clues and red herrings. Otherwise the story will be over before chapter
seven.
This is true. But mystery writers need to manage their red herrings. If the deceased met his demise via arrow, probably shot by a Mongolian horse longbow, then Missy Mild-Mannered Reporter is going to look like a very viable subject to the local constabulary.
Only we're sure she didn't do it because she's our hero! Okay, that means the longbow and the trophies are red herrings.
But they still need to be fired. Maybe not like Chekhov's gun, but they need to come back into the story and be reckoned with. Like maybe the real killer visited her apartment earlier when delivering pizza, then broke in to "borrow" the longbow in order to make Missy look like the murderous archer.
The Chekhov's Gun Rule Applies to Subplots
I've been running into this problem in a lot of fiction lately - both indie and traditionally published.
That's what inspired this post.
I
sometimes find myself flipping through whole chapters that obviously
have nothing to do with the main story. That's because the subplot
isn't hooked in with the main plot. It's just hanging there, not doing
anything.
The subplot has become the unfired Chekhov's gun.
For instance, one mystery had the protagonist go through endless chapter of police academy training after the discover of the body. The mysterious murder wasn't even mentioned for a good six chapters. I kept trying to figure out how her crush on a fellow aspiring policeperson was going to solve the mystery.
I finally realized it wasn't going to. None of the romance stuff had to do with the mystery. When I finally flipped through to a place where the main plot resumed, the hot fellow student didn't even make an appearance. He'd already gone off with a hotter female recruit.
It's fine to have a romance subplot in a mystery - in fact, that's my favorite kind. But that romance has to take place while some mystery-solving is going on. And hopefully it will provide some hindrances to the proceedings, and maybe some comic relief.
But if that romance doesn't "trigger" a new plot twist or reveal a clue, then it's an unfired gun on the wall. It's just hanging there, annoying your reader, who expects it to be relevant.
Naming a Character Creates a Chekhov's Gun
Another "unfired Chekov's gun" situation often comes up with the introduction of minor characters and "spear-carriers."
You don't want to introduce the pizza delivery guy by telling us how he got the nickname "Green Arrow" followed by two paragraphs about his archery expertise - unless he's going to reappear later in the story. And he better be doing something more archery-related than delivering another pie with extra pepperoni.
This is a common problem with newbie fiction. In creative writing courses we're taught to make characters vivid and alive. So every time you introduce a new character, no matter how minor, you want to make the memorable. You want to give them names and create great backstories for them.
Don't give into the urge, no matter what the creative writing teacher in your head is saying.
If the character is not going to reappear or be involved with the plot or subplot, don't give him a name. Don't even give him a quirky outfit. Just call him "the pizza guy" or "the Uber driver" or "the barista."
A named character becomes a Chekhov's gun. The reader will expect that character to come back and do something explosive.
Beward Research-itis
A lot of unfired guns come from what I call research-itis. That's when the author did a heckuva lot of research, and goldernit, they're going to tell you ever single fact they dug up.
You'll get three chapters on the historical significance of the Mongolian Longbow...and how Genghis Kahn used a smaller bow...which in the 17th century was replaced by the Manchu bow...And how the Manchu bows have larder siyahs and the presence of prominent string bridges...
None of which has anything to do with the dead guy in the living room with the arrow in his back.
If the reader doesn't need to know it to solve the mystery and it's not a red herring, keep it to yourself.
Although a lot of that research will come in very handy for blogposts and newsletters when you're marketing the book, so don't delete all those research notes!
Beta Readers and Editors Can Take Chekhov's Gun Off the Wall
It's tough to weed out all those unfired guns in your own work. You're sure you absolutely need to tell us that our heroine won those trophies when she was on her college archery team where her nemesis, Renee Rensinger, once stole her glasses before a meet...and she found out she could shoot better without them and didn't need glasses after all, which was great because her glasses made her look so dorky and after she stopped wearing them, Jake Hawkins noticed her for the first time. Jake turned out to be a creep, but...
Your editor will tell you different. And eventually you will thank her for it.
So will your readers.
BIO
Anne R. Allen (@anneallen) is the author of ten humorous mysteries, plus the bestselling writing guides The Author Blog - Easy Blogging for Busy Authors, and How to Be a Writer in the E-age, co-written with Catherine Ryan Hyde. Anne blogs with NYT bestselling author Ruth Harris at
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