Three days ago, I sat down to start a column about writing dialog--rules, myths, hints, tips--that I intended to post here at SleuthSayers today (I'm up every first, third, and fifth Saturday). Instead, I immediately saw a post by friend Don Longmuir on Facebook about the September 17 passing of crime/suspense author Nelson Demille.
All of a sudden I had no interest at all in writing a blog post about dialog. I couldn't seem to think about anything else except the unexpected loss of one of my favorite authors. I mean, much of what I learned and know about dialog--and other elements of fiction as well--I learned from DeMille's work. I devoured his books.
By way of background, Nelson DeMille was a NYT bestseller and Vietnam veteran who lived most of his life on Long Island. His novels were full of dry humor and sarcasm, and often avoided so-called "Hollywood endings"--they often finished in a satisfying but unexpected way, with the characters' futures unresolved. As far as I know, only one of his novels has been adapted for film: The General's Daughter (1990), starring John Travolta, Madeleine Stowe, and James Cromwell--though I suspect almost all of them have been optioned. Now that he's gone, I especially hope that more movies will follow.
I own all his major novels, in hardcover because I bought them as soon as they were released, beginning with By the Rivers of Babylon in 1978. (I was a Book-of-the-Month Club member back then, and I think it was a main selection, sent to me automatically.) I loved it, and was an avid fan from that point on. Looking at one of the shelves behind where I'm sitting right now, I have twenty-three of his novels, two of them co-written with his son Alex. Every one of them is special. DeMille is one of those few writers whose books I will pick up and re-read every few years.
One of the things that 's always surprised me a bit is that so many of my writer friends, and readers also, are unfamiliar with his fiction. Those who do know of him seem to be most familiar with one particular series he wrote, beginning with Plum Island in 1997, starring retired NYPD detective John Corey. I believe there are eight Corey novels, but I can tell you, I thought all DeMille's books, series or standalone, were good--well-written, entertaining, and sometimes educational. One of the things I most loved about them is the way he inserted humor into otherwise serious fiction, sometimes on almost every page. It makes reading--and re-reading--his novels even more fun.
For what it's worth, my favorite DeMilles are The Charm School (1988), Plum Island (1997), Up Country, (2002), Wild Fire (2006), and The Cuban Affair (2017). Only two of those are installments in the John Corey series, but again, I liked 'em all.
I never knew Mr. DeMille or met him, except via one Zoom call a couple of years ago. But some of those who did know him well--Otto Penzler, Andrew Gulli, and others--have told me he was as good and as interesting a person as he was a writer. I know for sure that he's one of several authors who had a great influence on me and my storytelling.
(Something only just occurred to me: The feeling I had when I learned of DeMille's death the other day was like the way I felt the week before, when I heard James Earl Jones had died. I never knew either of them, but somehow it seemed as if I did. Probably because I so admired and respected them, and spent so much time reading and watching them over the years.)
In closing, if you've not read the novels of Nelson DeMille I hope you will, and if you've already read some of his work, I'd love to hear what you think, in the comments section below. Personally, I will miss him greatly, and will miss looking forward to his next release.
As for my column on dialog, I'm not letting you off that easy. It'll be my next post.
See you in two weeks!
I remember Charm School best - wonderful title for the subject. I always saw him as the epitome of the Boomer male thriller writer, and I enjoyed his humour (which is sadly often missing in the thriller/noir books being published today, don't you think? Frankly, I think the entire world has lost its sense of humour.) Melodie
ReplyDeleteMelodie, you and I have never talked about DeMille, but I'm not at all surprised to find that you appreciated his humor. And yes, we rarely see that in thrillers being published today. Joe Lansdale is the only bestselling writer I can think of that uses humor to the extent DeMille did in otherwise serious stories/novels.
DeleteI've found that almost everyone loved The Charm School. What a premise! (I think I might go read it again . . .)
John, I too remember The Charm School vividly because of how brilliantly DeMille ratcheted up the suspense as the young American drove toward Moscow and safety in his Trans Am (not that I know anything about cars, but I remember that), with both the American Embassy and the reader on tenterhooks as to whether he would make it. Now if you lived in New York, you'd have met DeMille at Otto's parties at the Mysterious Bookshop... Not that I ever had a real conversation with him. He was definitely a guy's guy.
ReplyDeleteLiz, I figured you would like his writing. And by the way, I think you know EVERY writer in New York.
DeleteIt occurred to me the other day that it's been almost ten years since I went to most of those parties in NYC (though I missed Otto's) during Edgar Week, and saw you at several of them!
Thanks as always.
Never knew of him until now. Sad he's gone.
ReplyDeleteJustin, you would enjoy his books. You always hear the term "never a dull moment," but it's true for most of his writing.
DeleteI've read some of his work...years ago and The General's Daughter stands out in memory. Oh how I relate to those feelings when a strong person, a person admired for a host of substantial reasons leaves this world. A sorrow different than a loved one but somehow a lingering intensity that takes a part of your fiber with them. A reminder, there too we shall pass. Yes, I will definitely return to DeMille's work in the days ahead. Thanks for posting and pointing out the value of great writer's work.
ReplyDeleteThank YOU for your reply. Yes, it does hurt when someone you feel you know, through his or her writing or acting, dies, even though you weren't personally acquainted. I remember feeling a real sense of loss when Robert Parker died, back in 2010 (?) or so. It's a bit selfish, but I hated that I would never again see a brand-new book of his (although my friend Ace Atkins did pretty well reviving the Spenser series, for a long time).
DeleteThanks again for your thoughts.
To my shame, I've never read DeMille, but I'll be correcting that now. Thanks for highlighting his work, John.
ReplyDeleteWell, shame on you indeed, Joe. Seriously, you would enjoy his writing. None of the other authors I enjoy--and there are many of them--have a style quite like his.
DeleteI read Plum Island and from that point forward was hooked on his books. Sadly, I often think his wonderful contribution to the thriller genre is under appreciated. Thank you for your tribute.
ReplyDeleteDenise A. Martin
Hi Denise--thank you! Yes, I think his writing has been unappreciated. Main thing is, I appreciate it enough that I have all his books and can re-read them as many times as I want. He will certainly be missed.
DeleteThank you for this remembrance. CBS Sunday Morning remembered him in their "Passages" segment.
ReplyDeleteThat's good to hear, Jeff. Thank you as always!
DeleteYou are so welcome!
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