20 August 2024

Mixing Crime and Coming-of-Age Stories


I have never set out to write a coming-of-age story. When plotting, I usually don't think in such broad terms. I focus on the trees--who my characters are and what I want to happen in the tale. Only later, after I finish a story or near its end, do I realize what my forest looks like. And what a lot of my forests have looked like in recent years--to belabor the idiom--are coming-of-age stories.

I didn't major in English in college, so forgive me if I mess up this definition. A coming-of-age story is one in which the main character matures from childhood to adulthood (emotionally, not necessarily in age) because of a journey or perilous situation the character lives through. Because crime/mystery tales often involve perilous situations, they are tailor-made for stories in which children, teenagers, and young adults grow.

The character development in these stories doesn't have to be positive. The stories don't have to end with the good guys living happily ever after. But the journey or perilous situation should cause the main character to see things differently by the end, to be a different person.

It was only recently that I realized how many coming-of-age stories I have written. In order of publication:

  • "Truth and Consequences" is about a teenager determined to find out where her father goes each Saturday. The answer breaks her heart. This story was originally published in the anthology Mystery Times Ten, republished in my collection, Don't Get Mad, Get Even.
  • "Ulterior Motives" is about a teenager who volunteers for a political campaign. There's a mystery in this small town, and a secret, and a teenage girl at the middle of it all who doesn't think the adults around her understand much--which maybe they don't. This story was published in the anthology Ride 2.
  • "Evil Little Girl" tells the tale of a bullied girl at sleepaway camp and what happens when her figurative cries for help fail. This story originally appeared in Don't Get Mad, Get Even.
  • "Alex's Choice" is about a twelve-year-old’s quest to stop a family tragedy long after it happened and the unexpected hard choices the child faces. This story was published in the crime, time-travel anthology I edited, Crime Travel.
  • "Second Chance" is a story about identical twins forced into foster care, who find each other again several years later, at age eighteen. The older brother--by eight minutes--had always known it was his job to protect his little brother, but now, the enemy he faces is someone he never expected. This story was published in the anthology Mickey Finn: 21st Century Noir.
  • "Wishful Thinking" is a ghost story with four tweens who creep into an old abandoned house, searching for a million dollars of stolen money. They don't believe in ghosts when they go inside, but maybe they should. This story originally appeared in issue 6 of Black Cat Weekly. It also can be
    purchased as an individual story.
  • "Beauty and the Beyotch" is a tale about three girls told from two perspectives about one thing--their struggle to make their deepest desires come true. What happens when those dreams collide? This story was published in issue 29 of Sherlock Holmes Mystery Magazine.
  • "For Bailey" is about a town with a pending vote to ban consumer fireworks and the teenager determined to have the vote pass, for all the scared animals and people. She comes up with a plan, but she doesn't foresee the consequences. This story was published in the anthology Low Down Dirty Vote Volume 3: The Color of My Vote.
  • "Real Courage" has four point-of-view characters, three of them teenagers. The story opens in the 1980s with a teenage girl facing ostracism. It moves on to her son in the 2010s. After promising his dying mom he would always stand up for the awkward girl who lives next door, he finds himself in a situation no one could have anticipated. This is a story about people making bad choices with the best intentions. It was published in issue 14 of Black Cat Mystery Magazine.
  • "Teenage Dirtbag" tells the story of a teenage guy infatuated with a girl who already has a boyfriend--a boyfriend who doesn't treat her--or anyone--with respect. The infatuated guy comes up with a plan to rectify that. This story was published in the anthology (I Just) Died In Your Arms: Crime Fiction Inspired by One-Hit Wonders, Volume 1.
  • "Never Have I Ever" is about a college student playing her favorite secrets-sharing drinking game with her friends. But she has secrets she’ll never share--because she's obsessed. Because she's haunted. Because she has a plan. This story was published in the anthology Murder, Neat.

Eleven stories. Maybe I should put them together in a collection with a new one or two. After all, it sure seems I have a predilection for this type of tale. If you haven't read "Real Courage," it is available on my website. The story is a current finalist for the Anthony and Macavity Awards, and it was a finalist for the Agatha Award earlier this year. You can find it by clicking here.

If you have any favorite coming-of-age crime/mystery stories, I would love to hear about them in the comments. My friend and fellow SleuthSayer Art Taylor certainly has a few great ones.


17 comments:

  1. Good topic, Barb. One of my favorites is "Boo Radley College Prep," by Karen Harrington, in Ellery Queen's Mystery Magazine, January/February 2021. I think my story "Shooting at Firemen" (AHMM July 2015) qualifies.

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    1. Thanks, Rob. Was your Firemen story a Derringer finalist? I think I remember reading it during awards season.

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    2. Yup. . Finalist for the 2016 Derringer Award for Best Long Story.

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  2. they would make a fine collection and one, perhaps, particularly appealing to younger readers who do not see too many teenage characters in most short mystery stories.

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    1. That is a good point about bringing younger readers to mystery. Thanks, Janice. I will definitely put this idea on my to-do list.

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  3. Never really thought about it before Barb, but you're right! I do have a few myself. Most obviously, Crime Club (YA) and the entire Goddaughter series, where Gina has to come to terms with coming from a mob family (albeit fun one) and what is she going to do about it - abandon them, or try to turn them to good. Maybe coming-of-age stories help us writers to come to terms with things left over from our own salad days?

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    1. They very well could, Mel. Of course, we can work out real-life issues when writing about adults too. Who needs a therapist when you can expel your demons on the page.

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  4. I think my series of Linda Thompson as a child tales counts: "Grown Ups are All Alike" (two neighbors who aren't who everyone thinks they are, and Linda is the only one who notices they aren't), "The Headless Horseman" (a terrifying neighbor who turns out to not be so bad after all...) (both in AHMM). I've also done a couple of others, the saga of Grant Tripp and his best friend from childhood who he loses and regains in "The Closing of the Lodge".

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    1. Sounds like you also have a thing for neighbors, Eve.

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    2. Of course. Neighbors are fascinating!

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  5. This was a fun post, Barb. I think coming-of-age stories are great fun to read, and to write--and I believe one reason they're enjoyable to write is that kids make great protagonists.

    As for your question, I just counted up my coming-of-age mystery stories, and I've had 48 published. Too many to list, but they've appeared in AHMM (3), EQMM (1), Strand (4), Mystery Magazine (6), Black Cat Myst. Mag. (1), The Sat. Eve. Post print edition (5), Futures (1), Tough (1), Star Magazine (1), Grit (2), Spinetingler (1), St. Anthony Messenger (1), Flash Bang Mysteries (1), 8 other magazines, and 12 anthologies.

    As Rob said, this is a great topic, one I'd never even thought about, before.

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    1. Well, damn. Forty-eight stories. You're the one who should be putting out a book of coming-of-age stories, John. I bow down to you.

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    2. No, it's as you said, Barb--I rarely set out to write a coming-of-age story. It just happens that way, when a kid turns out to be the main character and what he or she does is learn something about life in the process. And, again, writing about children can be fun to do. Ask Stephen King (The Shining, The Body, Carrie, Cujo, The Long Walk, Salem's Lot, It, Firestarter, Rage, The Talisman, Christine, Eyes of the Dragon, Hearts in Atlantis, Cell, The Institute, The Girl Who Loved Tom Gordon, Cycle of the Werewolf, etc., etc.--my shelves are full of 'em).

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  6. Hey Barb, Great post! I've noticed for quite some time that you use young adult or younger characters in your stories. I wondered if you've ever considered writing mysteries for that age group, specifically. I'd love to see a collection...bc

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    1. I just saw this, Bobbi. A collection of coming-of-age stories or simply one in which all the main characters are children or teenagers would not be a bad idea. I will put it on my list of things to do someday.

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  7. Great post, Barb — and thanks for the shout-out at the end!

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    1. You're welcome, Art! Sorry I didn't see this till now.

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